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for Stop teasing us Sensei!

by LordOfLust

schedule April 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I can't wait for kushina to get fucked by guys with huge cocks.

schedule April 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

what a chapter so looking foward to see what happens in the next chapter

person SPG
schedule April 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

dont remember if i mentioned it allready but this story is great, definetly one of my top 10 stories. probley top 5 if i only include this site.

person Pryde
schedule March 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I read in your author's notes at the end that you weren't sure about this particular chapter. I can assure you that your worries are completely unfounded.

This was another solid update to a great story. I suppose there are some who may have been disappointed that the hotspring scene didn't simply unfold into an outright gangbang, but I am not one of them. It was a good smut scene. Not only was it really fucking hot, but you also remembered to incoporate the boy's unique personalities. You even included a little introspection with Kushina; its nice to see that she's started to feel a lot less guilty about her trysts with her students.

I also liked the fact that it was Takako who got first dibs on Kushina, if only because he seems to have been kind of pushed aside when it comes to the other rewards. I'll be interested to see if he talks/brags about it to his teammates, or if he keeps quiet about it and tries for a repeat next chapter.

That being said, however, I would like to see Kushina getting it on with someone else eventually. It seemed like you were planning to go that route early on with Konohamaru and his friend (who I'm assuming was Udon) but you suddenly seemed to drop that in the next chapter when you started the chunin exam. And in chapter eight there was another, a very brief allusion to Kushina paying a visit to a hospitalized Rock Lee.

“It’s about the gennin who got hurt, Rock Lee. His wounds were even worse than we anticipated and the only way we can hope to treat them is by finding Tsunade.” Minato spoke while Kushina seemed pretty distant, she did remember that fast taijutsu gennin and if he was a friend of Naruto’s then maybe she should pay him a visit and wish him a speedy recovery.

But those are just some examples for things I would like to see you expand on. Either way, this is hands down the best Naruto lemon fic I've read since Eroninja and I eagerly await the next chapter. By eagerly I of course mean impatiently. Please write the next chapter soon.

Give me MOAR!

schedule February 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loved the story.

Your story is one of my best favourite.please make kushina fall further into debauchery.

I wish i was in takako position fucking kushina raw with minato downstairs.

Please update soon.

schedule February 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

dam what a chapter. looking forward to see what happens in the next chapter and who will be the next lucky kid to get a go with kushina have to wait and see

schedule February 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Fuck that was hot she is becoming a complete slut, I just love it. I can't wait for chapter 10.

person Finally!!
schedule January 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Finally you decide to update lol, it was worth the wait, hoping things only get hotter from here on out 

person Anonymous
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the update!

Is there any hope you could update you're other story too?

person Omega
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Simply brilliant