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for Stop teasing us Sensei!

by LordOfLust

person Anonymous
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story, but dont turn it into one of those stupid, stupid doujin plots where 12 year boys make the woman into some pathetic sex slave with no will power and permanent fucked silly expression. There were a few hints in the last chapter...

Keep Kushina in control dude. She's definitely not that type, and would rather smack any offenders or just fuck them till they couldnt stand anymore (she's got waay more endurance, for several reasons).

Plus those kind of plots dont make any sense with unskilled young kids.  Cmon.

You can write an excellent story here without resorting to that crap.

 

 

person Jordozz
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Mmm, somehow can't get into my account so having to review a a Guest.

Anway, fun stuff. I was actually expecting kushina to get gangbanged stupid by them. Still, it was interesting either way. I was a bit disappointed it was the shy kid who banged her, I was hoping it would be Komachi who'd make her his bitch. He's enjoying making her submissive to him. Oh well, there's always next chapter.

person Random guy!
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

shiiiiiit that was a great. I demand more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! at least one every 2 weeks or a month would be great.

person Julio
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great ch glad to see your back and the story is fully developing now, was the kyuubi responsible for kushina's increased lust?

I eagerly await your next update

schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Totally worth the wait.

I admit I was hopping for a gangbang, but I suppose it's best to take things gradually.

schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

How could we ever be mad at you. ;-)
A shame that it was the shy kid but I guess it is better for the buildup. Can't wait to see the other handling a situation like this. I hope that Kushina gets more dominated, you already hinted a bit with the "-sama". I can imagine that it was difficult to finally come to the actual sex but you did a good job, although I like it more when the boys are pushing her. :-D

As always, keep up the great work and update soon.^^  

 

person Ynk
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well, this chapter was pretty good! Tho, I hope we'll see soon more of the genin dominating Kushina. That would be the best!

person flacj
schedule January 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful work as usual. Keep up the great work. I love seeing Kushina getting NTR'd and getting corrupted. The Age difference is the best aspect of it, it makes it that much hotter! Hopefully it leads to a scenario where Naruto finds out, but is powerless to do anything about it, and Kiba rubs it in his face saying things like " your mom was great and she loves me more than you."

 

I can't wait for your next chapter. Hopefully it comes out soon, I can't wait.  Please don't make us wait a long time again. XD

schedule January 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Perfect.

Fucking kushina in her home.it would be nice if they fuck kushina while minato is downstairs eating.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

person Anonymous
schedule January 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait if/when Naruto and Minato find out what Kushina has been doing