Awesome story loved this chapter
You could have danzo justify keeping kushina for herself with the logic that one of the best ways to protect the Leaf Village Would be by establishing a monarchical rating of the hokage setting himself and his blood line up as the primary guardians simultaneously adding to his blood lines power by adding te uzumaki body techniques to his lineage While maintaining the 9 tails in his hands and power structure forever. For the question about the student you could pick Simone from chojis clan they have a technique to supersize parts of there anatomy yet it's never retired in pervy ways.
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Don't expect many reviews on this site. Can't speak for all, but for me it's too inconvenient here.
If you want feedback, post this fic on FF.net or AO3.
Most stories usually dive into the sex but I like the way you're takin your time with this and how subtle Danzo is being with Kushina.
I wonder why Danzo is allowing information about Kushina to be leaked? She is the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki so I imagined that he would keep information about her under wraps.
Keep up with the good work!
Thank you for your work
Awesome story, can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work and will Kushina get raped in this fic?
Honestly, I must admit that I never thought to review, simply because I'm accostumed to FF.net where the review bar is immediately accessible once you finish the last sentence, so anything I'd wish to say was still fresh.
I am sorry if this has in anyway brought you to believe that I am not interested in reviewing.
Still, I am hoping to see more of this,
Drake Darkduke.
he man great story so far i like the setting with danzo being at the center of it. now is danzo more or less a good guy in this fic or is he all bad. and also maybe for later chapter you could have fem naruto have the same thing happen if you make danzo have kushina marry minato for mor control of the village type of thing. overall greest job and keep them coming
Hey there again, (this time logged in and not as anon)
I'm glad to see that you are still taking things slowly, as you already said, rushing to the naughty bits can be fun but it doesn't really have a place in multi-chapter stories that at least have a semblance of a plot.
Although I have to admit that I enjoyed the 'teasing' scene. Just to be clear, Kushina's age should be around 12-13? Or did you change it (or am I wrong)?
I also liked Danzou's way of explaining the realities of the shinobi world, and his distaste for 'pampered civilians'. I wonder what he would say to Sakura?
Regarding your Idea for Kushina's possible future genin, I already wrote a small post in your discussion thread but I fell like I need to clarify some tings (and since I'm already here I'll just do it in my review).
I think I misunderstood the point at first, to me it sounded like you wanted Kushina to train a partner, for herself, but I guess I was wrong about that. Personally, I am still favouring a boy student, now however mostly because I have a thing for Kushina sleeping with her younger male students, instead of anything practical.
If you do decide on a female student I would prefer Yuugao or Rin. Yuugao because I think hers and Kushina's skill sets mesh rather well, and Rin because she is a rare character, you barely see any stories with her making more than a guest appearance or a single lemon chapter.
Also, don't worry so much about the lazy readers. Most are probably too busy jacking off to reviews idk... or maybe they just lack common courtesy...
Anyways I hope you won't be busy for too long, as I am really enjoying your story. Hope to see and update soon.
Cheers,
C_Wade
Agh, so close to the full thing! as the title says, you're teasing us! looking forward to the full course