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person Anonymous
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I do like your stories and i can't wait for you to update this story and your other story Kushina's Fuck-Ventures 1.Keep up the great work

 

person Anonymous
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

The story is really good but i just wish it was moving a little faster

 

person Red
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I wish I was good enough to get that many views ;-;

 

person Zero16
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I like the build up and flow of your story keep it up, I can't wait for your next installation and I like anko, you can part possibly party the party of the she was just betrayed by orochimaru and kushina takes care of her which causes blind devotion and a need to thank kushina for not hating her like the rest of the village

person Cwade
schedule August 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter (and story)!

I like that you don't just rush to the 'naughty' parts, there are tons of storys like that already, and instead take the time to develope the plot (which is lacking, or even entirely missing, in 90% of the stories on this site) properly.

I wonder though, since kushina was said to have a rather cheery/happy/etc. personality in canon on how it will conflict with the 'darker' aspects of root. Will she be forced to obey because of the command from danzo but hate it, or will she develope a different personality compared to canon?

Hope to see an update soon,

cheers.

person Shikabootay
schedule August 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Moar please =V

schedule August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

One hell of an awesome story mate

person Yuuya26
schedule August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

At the plot points you stopped at Rise to hokage, are you going to finish the story after that or are you going to write some of the things from the anime??

person Anonymous
schedule August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Your stories aren't bad but guacamole is nasty I ope you update soon

schedule August 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

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