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June 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think the chapter turned out very well as is, and I enjoyed the amount of thought you're putting into fleshing out Danzo, as well as the work put into the plot. I was pretty hesitant on the story before, since it seemed like it would just be a quick wank, but it's turning out to be very interesting. Look forward to reading more. Thanks for writing.
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June 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
just read this agin for the 3rd time and just wonted to say Im looking forward to more
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June 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, update as soon as you can I'm very interested in this development!
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June 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I have a question, since Kushina has the Kyuubi sealed in her, doesn't that mean it will notice the Kotoamatsukami? Or is it under the effects too? Because if it is then Danzo will have his very own Tailed Beast wrapped around his finger.
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June 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Where is the smut
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June 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope there's more to come on this one like say Danzo deflowers her maybe a seen where she is having sex with the Fire Daimyō for some faver or presents Naruko to Danzo
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June 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
A good start!
The writing is solid, it doesn't rush and it features Kushina!
There is never enough Kushina!
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June 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Your timeline is messed up for one, plus a Byakugan can see past the Kotomatsukami and the Kotomatsukami can be shaken off quite easily when the user finds out