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schedule December 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Bring on Naruto's seduction >:3

Kiba still has his work cut out for him

person Afan
schedule September 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow dude. I absolutely love Kiba/Naru because they're so muscular/manly and I like that you emphasised those aspects. I liked the dialogue of Kiba being so horny that he walked right up to Naruto and ground on his ass. 

I liked the smells/descriptions/senses and how they were written too. Just a really great story!

Please consider adding more or doing a sequel! It seemed to be alluded to at the end. I can just imagine Kiba dumping his hot, thick load in his briefs, being full sated.

The armpit sniffing was so fricken hot too dude. You have no idea! Was kinda hoping Kiba would sneak a finger into Naruto's cleft for a quick smell/taste. Are they cut/uncut too? Couldn't tell!

Thanks a bunch, great work and looking forward to more! This level of depth and sensory explanation needs expansion!!

person Anonymous
schedule July 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

There isn't enough KibaNaru out there, so thank you very much! And to comment on the other review, for my part I'll be very pleased if this'll have bottom!Naruto, though I do like people reversing roles every once in a while, or half the time.

person Meh
schedule June 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was okay, but I really dislike Sub!Naruto, which is where this is obviously going.