Truly a fantastic work of orgasmic art. For real I'm in love... also checked out a bunch oh your other stories... A+
Keep up the good work cuz I can't wait till the next chapter
thx ;)
You could give Naruko the power to change the gender of a male so that she could fuck Haku.
Great chapter
This was great I love the way it's going. Keep it up
Great chapter
Fuck! I wish there was a comic of this cause it's fucking hot!!
Loved your story so far.Not an extraordinarily original setting but very well written.The size is very good, as well as the grammar.
I feel like the sex scenes could do some work.Don't know what exactly though.Maybe more vocal exclamations during the act, or just more 'depravity' and 'dirtyness' in general.But it's just my opinion, you don't have to take it to heart.
I'm a sucker for Ino in any Naruto smut story, so I really hope she is the focus of some of the next chapters.The more Ino there is' the more I like it.Maybe consider Sakura as well?
All in all, one of the best and most promising stories in this section of the site in a while.And while I generally don't like Futa, I liked your take on it and your writing style.
I hope to see more chapters in the future!Thank you and good luck.
I am hoping Hanabi joins in! Maybe have her and Moegi be lovers and Hanabi asks Hinata for advice on how to go further. Hinata suggests getting some experience first with her girlfriend and explains to bring Moegi with her…hentai logic reigns supreme lol
hope you continue this!
interesting story
This was so good, and steaming hot. Very much looking for it to continue. Thanks for sharing!