Damn i love this story... would be better if he wasn't a shota but whatever. And why even is he a shota? Aside from it being a fetish of yours I'm guessing?
I'll be honest here, i skipped most of this chapter. im not exactly comfortable with loli sex so thats part of it. second, i was kind of hoping for more Issei Hyoudou, but then i saw Natsu was in here. however you completely skipped over his scene with Lisanna and Lucy. seriously? While a big fan of Naruto getting lots of pussy, I am still not a fan of girl/harem stealing, which i have mentioned in my first review.
Here is all i am asking for, more actual scenes with males other than naruto. heck, even and MMF scene would be acceptable, and i usually make it my policy to avoid those.
Amazing chapter
His is the guy who you labeled as Anon 2 in your previous chapter. Note I am using my phone to type this so expect mistakes. First, thanks for taking the time tfor read and respected he to my review. What other series will you use? Also, I am disappointed that Issei's scene was cut so short. I hope to see more of him.
Can't wait for Naruto to test how flexible hinata really is.
Its a harem story for Futa!Artuia Pendragon!
Title: Fate/Grand Harem
Alright, you know the deal that Artuia made a deal with the world(Alaya) and all at the end of her life, correct? Well, what if it was a different type of deal than the one she made in canon? What if the deal was that she be tasked with stopping Solomon from destroying all of history in the world in exchange for what her heart desires(its not saving her kingdom, but something else), effectively taking the place as the Fate/Grand Order protagonist.
Now, Alaya informs Artuia that since she will be dealing with the King of Magic himself, that Excalibur, and her current abilities will not be enough to stop Solomon, he was able to tell Artuia that she is able to wield the First True Magic(the Denial of Nothingess). This seemingly means the creation of objects from nothing. The user of the First Magic is long dead, so there is little to be said. However, the heir apparent of the First Magic user is still alive somewhere. Alaya states that Uther, Artuia's father was that wielder of First True Magic that died and that she is that heir.
However, since Alaya has just not awakened that ablility, and Artuia has not used that magic all her life, she must grow and evolve it in unorthodox ways...by using the hunger-than-a-gorrilla d*** and balls she has been given! The more sex with the woman throughout history she has, the more that True Magic she has will grow. The more heart-to-heart and passionate the sex is, the stronger she shall become than before.
How does it sound to you?
PS: Ignore the title part. You can name it whatever the hell you please.
PPS: Yes, that very last one about the title is from me.
PPS: To be exact, this whole thing below is a request from me to you for a story.
So...will you do it?
The continuation with the presence of hinata pleases me much. Keep on going. Only one thing: you could specify the breast size of the breasts now and in the future, please?