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person Random guy
schedule December 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I request Morrigan Aensland from Capcom's Darkstalkers. Ahri from League of Legends. Black Hanekawa from Bakemonogatari.

Also, if Rias is a succubus, would it not make more sense if she fell in love with the Incubus Prince. I understand your stance on the fickle love but still...

schedule December 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Damn two threesomes in one chapter this is awesome. I loved how he just went to town on Ino and Sakura.

schedule December 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter 

person fliggy91
schedule November 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I actually like that naruto will share girls lol when naruto gives rais and any other girls to issei could there be a dp or a gang at some point lol as i also want to see issei with any naruto girls if possible or even kushina at some point lol really like this story and i hope u stay on the same path as its alot more interesting than just naruto fucking everyone

person bob580
schedule November 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Lol i love the fact that ur including other sex lifes in the story just having naruto fuck every girl and nothing else becomes boring real fast i hope u dont listen to those guys that just want naruto mix it up lol it keeps the story hot

person Landqvist
schedule November 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

cant wait to see the part with rias and akeno.

person Anon
schedule November 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I loved the first few chapters, but your latest with prof bitch...not so much. The incubus AU has enough interest to it, so adding in crossovers just makes the story confusing and weird. I'm looking forward to more chapters with Kushina, Hinata, Sakura, Ino, etc. Kushina'a scenes you wrote, like in chapter 1, were the hottest!! Your writing during Shizune's scene was also one of the best yet. Just please don't lose focus and make this into some non-Naruto fic :(

person Guest 42
schedule November 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have enjoyed the story so far, though the Minato lemon scene held no interst to me. Personally could you have Nauto decide to to Rias, Akeno and Hinata all for himself in teir one and just have him give Issei the members Risers harem when he shos up  and have Naruto kill him. Rather then Naruto give him two of the girls.

person BBWulf
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yup, I'm out. It's obvious this has taken a turn that I have no interest in. Your original target audience was those who enjoy the character Naruto, an Harems. Now you're branching out, and are going to lose some followers, like myself. As for it being a "large reality"; lol, good one. That excuse must have taken you a while, huh?
person Qelotl
schedule November 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Mate you have made quite the world here.

The way you incorporated everything into the naruto verse is just genius and your writing style is extremely impressive. I don't think i've seen a better writer on this site.

So i'm curious about a few things. Since you included highschool dxd in your mythos will you include all the girls? Reason i'm asking is because of Irina. She's my favorite girl and i was wondering if you could include her in the fun.

How many anime will you include? At this point you could really include any of them. I can see Shinmai Maou no Testament, Maouyuu Maou Yuusha, they don't even have to be demon anime. You included Assassination Classroom easily enough.

Though i do have a challenge for you if you'd like to accept it. If you've seen Yu Yu Hakusho include a girl of your choice from that. If you can do that you have exceeded my expectations. This story will become legendary in my eyes(pretty close to it already).

Anyway mate hope you keep up this pace. This story so far is honestly incredible and it's one of the few lewds stories i read where i actually care about the story, which is what i look for in fanfics. Balancing the lewdness with a good story, which you have accomplished in spades.

Well done mate i'm waiting on the next chapter.