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schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Naruto should share his harem because an incubus would have no problem letting other males join in to double team or even gangbang some girls.

person guest
schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Can you tell us who is in the tiers and will Samui mabui Yugito Rias Akeno his sisters belong to Naruto

person Anonymous
schedule November 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You made it sound like a full 15 minutes is a long time for a newborn to breast feed. I heard that they take much longer (like an hour or something), because they arn't cordinated. So it's not that they drink alot, it's they, on average, drink slow.

schedule November 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter 

person Ynk
schedule November 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love this story! I hope Naruto fucks the whole village!

person Anonymous
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

We? How many people are working on this fic?

person Anonymous
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I was worried the story was abandoned.

The explanation behind Naruto's apparent youth was interesting. I hope you elaborate on why he has to keep his power hidden later on. I half expect that if he didn't hide it, his presence would have a permanent and drastic effect on nearby females, including stripping them of much of their mind, like some kind of lovecraftian horror. I don't think that explains why it needs to be a secret though. I think the more likely reason is that if Naruto didn't conceal his power it would possibly (or maybe definitely) attract the attention of individuals, groups, or creatures that Kushina wants Naruto to stay beneath the notice of, possibly villains that have yet to be introduced.

Pretty sure that in canon, Shikamaru's abilities are better in total darkness, because existing shadows can contribute to the length of Shadow Imitation Technique, as demonstrated by adding to the distance while it was underground and the shadow of the wall in his fight against Temari. On the other hand, he wasn't using the Shadow Imitation Technique in chapter 5 of this fic.

I think Sakura would have known what type of demon Naruto was when she talked with Ino on the bleachers because of her recall at the end of the scene where she and Naruto had sex. Then again, memories don't always show up whenever they are relevant.

person RAWR
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a bit meh for me. Didn't care much for the Minato smutt, and the Naruto smutt was very lacking in quality compared to previous chapters.
person York
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I gotta agree with RAWR on this one

person Anonymous
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

personally i didnt realy like the minato smut, id much rather have some naruto smut instead