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person Anonymous
schedule September 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Sorry for reviewing more than once.
Naruto's small size means he will probably have limmited physical reach. You mentioned him being able to emit energy from his horns. I can't wait to see what his fighting style is and if that is a part of it. I doubt it is simply seducing his opponent, as all his sexual partners so far have been female humanoids, and of course there is no guarentee his opponents will be in that category.

schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Amazing chapter

person Anonymous
schedule September 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

"Breaking" the girl? And Tsume told Naruto to demonstrate on her daughter? What a terrible mother! Not that I actually care if the characters are immoral.

person sakura79
schedule August 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story so far, looking forward for the next update.

person swagman123
schedule August 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great work! really liked it though not quite sure why you made him 16 years old but are making it so his physical body is the size of an 8 year old kinda weird as i feel part of the appeal to straight shota is having busty women being dominated by young boys who barely understand sex as is but either way im extremely looking forward to more especally DxD and Fairy tail characters 

person Anonymous
schedule August 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hopefully he goes to the one piece world.

person C_Wade
schedule August 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

A very well written story.

While personally, I am not múch of a fan of all those 'mega cock' stories, it kind of fits an incubus Naruto. I really hope you continue this.

I have one question about the crossovers, though. Obviously, this story is an AU, but how will the crossovers be included in your story. Will you merge all the mentioned 'verses into one big 'superverse', or, like most people do, will you write them as arcs, like one crossover at a time? I really hope it will be the first... Nevertheless, I hope you update soon.

schedule August 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

@C_Wade

Yes, all of the crossovers are melded together. There will be arcs, those will be for the 'plot.'

schedule August 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Interesting story

schedule August 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Cant wait for the next chapter