This is getting more and more fascinating!!! So can't wait for more!!! see you again on Friday!!!
That was a really fascinating chapter!!! Can't wait for more of this!!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!
Sweet chapter!!! The flirting was nice!!! I really liked it!!! Thanks for the update and see you again soon!!!
I'm really loving this! Naruto has more pages in the bingo book than most, and Iruka has a high bounty on his head. Wonder where they got all the misinformation. Will we see Genma's reaction to being labled as a chunnin again? I love the interactions between Naruto and Iruka, not just in your story but in general, and wonder if that might be your pairing in the end. Good work, can't wait for the next update.
Really great chapter!!! Thanks a lot for the post!!! I wonder who provided the info on Naruto!!! Hope to hear from you again soon!!!
Nice start!!! I'd like to read more of this!!! I really like the idea of exploring desk chunin!!! I knew they couldn't be as weak as everybody thinks I mean they are still chunin!!! So can't wait to learn more about this new world!!!! See you again soon!!!
I like the start of this, and from what I've seen and read in the anime and manga, you've got the "desk jockeys" down to a "T". I look forward to reading the rest.