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schedule January 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh boy. More triangles. And drama and mystery. This is getting good. And confusing. I love surprises. 

schedule January 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I really like this one. I wonder who the person is. 

It was really sweet how Oro saved Ji. His loved one. Omg. How cute. I still hope they get together soon. 

schedule November 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Boo kenji I don't like him. Yay for OroJi

schedule October 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's nice to know that they seek comfort in each other. Despite still not telling each other how they feel. I really thought Oro was gonna leave and some big drama. But I'm sure that will come soon. Can't wait for more. 

schedule October 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm surprised Ji didn't sense Oro chakra. But I am glad Oro heard him trying to be confident to ask him out. Hopefully it happens soon. Before Kenji comes into the picture. Thanks for the update. 

schedule October 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Dammit Jiraiya wth? Men. 

That was great. But I was hoping they would finally tell each other how the other felt. Hope more good news is to come soon. 

schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Omg. I loved it. I hope Oro and Ji get together. I don't think I like Kenji. But I can't wait to see what happens if kenji tries to take Oro away. Update again soon please. 

schedule October 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nooo Go after him Pervy Sage!!! I can't wait. What's gonna happen?! Cmon. Hurry!!!

 

OMG this was so good. Love this Chapter. 

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm sorry it's taking me so long to review.  I have a class this Sunday morning. 

 

Anyways. I'm gglad easing that guy forgot his name is his ex? What his name? Midori? Anyways. I love how Jiraiya is all over Oro and fawning over him it's so sweet. 

 

Cant wait for more. ❤️❤️❤️

schedule October 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Finally!!! I'm so glad you updated. I loved it. But I'm curious as to see what will happen next. I also hope this continues and has a surprise plot or something.