rate_review Reviews

This was very, very good. Decent grammar and very well structured.You put some effort into the set-up as well, which is nice.I only wish it was longer.

Also, Ino gives me a boner.If the story has Ino in it, I'm in. And you managed to capture her personality quite nicely.I hope this story has more Ino in it, be it a continuation of this scene or a different installment altogether.

Thank you and good luck!

Interesting story