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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

person ElChapo
schedule May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I wish you did a bit more with Robin. She could be a really good character for continual use. An don top of that you could also do characters like Koyuki Kazahana from the first Naruto movie or some shit like that. 

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Not really a fan of this chapter, maybe because I'm not a big fan of Sakura herself.

however it's always nice to see you active and the effort you put into things.

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

God, does it mean that Sasuke is going to Boruto and his sister as well? It'd be amazing! 

schedule May 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well that was definitely a surprise 

i give credit where it's due 

your updates are fast I can't even catch up 

the storyline is on point though I do disagree on certain things like Hanabi and fem konohamaru 

but rest is simply amazing 

schedule May 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good to see the Inuzuka again after so long. 

I also enjoyed the previous Nico Robin chapter despite not voting for her. (Sigh) Is my chosen character ever going to make it in? Probably not.

A good consolation prize is the speed of updates, and one I am happy to receive. 

 

Keep up up the good work!

schedule May 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lol I hadn't finished Bday surprise when you posted kurenai's. Thought you might wanna know that the straw poll has Lucy instead of rangiku in the AN. Is it bad that I'm imagining assume being selected as jonin sensei for hanabi, fem.kono, and moegi? And taking them on the road like rias, maybe joint sensei with naruko. So they are not out of the village all the time. But thanks for the new chapters. See ya again soon.

person ElChapo
schedule May 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yea just saw the poll and Robin is probably gonna win it by a mile and a half but I'm excited for that. Her, Erza, and Rangiku would have been one of my favorite picks so considering Robin got 1st I'm happy. And yea there's a lot of characters you can still use lol.

schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I enjoyed this story for chapters involving the konoha kunoichi. Especially Sakura, Ino and Hinata omg favs. Tsunade's pretty hot too. Medic kunoichi threesome??? lol! But I'm personally not really interested in crossovers since I don't keep up w other anime series so...eh. I guess I'll check back in a few weeks and see if you're back to naruto girls again lmao

schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story. Its goods to see sasuke harem story. I was wondering if you could add Femkyuubi to harem as that pairing has never been done. Also could you add either kaguya or kushina or mito uxumaki to the harem pls. 

schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I hope you make a Naruto One of this Fanfic