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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

person glk
schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You totally based this last chapter on THAT Sasuke harem pic, didn't you?

person ElChapo
schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ehh me personally I'm not to sold on the idea of a female Konohamaru or Hanabi. I feel like there are more characters you could implement into the story other than them. It just feels weird adding them in since I'm used to seeing them young and shit. You could use a lot of the filler females or things of that nature. And there's always that crossover I'm looking forward to lol.

person ElChapo
schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Not to mention you could always add characters like Kaguya, Yugito, Guren, and more people like that.

person ElChapo
schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm excited to see where this mini arc leads. And I'm definitely excited over the vote for the new crossover character. Good chapter.

schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hm, a surprise for Sasuke...

I'm going to guess that someone was already pregnant before Rias, either Naruko or Sakura. I'm leaning more towards the latter due to the timeline.

Sarada?

schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Double trouble in the heatwave nice chapter not to keen on Gina but tensei was good 

schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Now the question is will Sasuke find out? Or not? 

Man I can't catch up with these updates they so fast

👌👌

schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Bdsm not bad I like it maybe you could do that again but with someone else 

I'm guessing Sasuke is going to meet his child 🤔

person ElChapo
schedule May 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm really enjoying the developing romance these past few chapters. It doesn't make Sasuke seem all that heartless and all. Tho I hope this isn't the end of you implementing a few more characters from different series. I'm still holding out hope that you might do a chapter with Rangiku or Erza or something like that.

schedule May 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Honestly, I kind of did see something like this coming, if not who exactly. But even so, morning after pills exist so...

Also, still mulling over what this 'surprise' in chapter 25 could be.