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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lol sorry I didn't manage to review again before now, pc is in the shop, and kindles are not the easiest device to write reviews on. Rias' writing off felt pretty natural, so that's good. Yugao was an attractive choice as always, the wave chapter was fun, and I honestly liked the kurotsuchi chapter, but unlike a lot of people these days, i don't just mentally adjust all breasts in my smut to dd. Variety is spice after all, my preferred body type is healthy. That's all. So thanks for a new chappie or 3, and I'll try and review again. Shooting for every 3rd as a minimum.

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice chapter 

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lol, guess I can do another review today. Make no mistake, I'll take well written smut almost all day/ everyday, but I'm glad to see it's not just, sasuke finds 30 warm places to stick it. So I am glad to see the romance added.

person glk
schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I don't mind for you to slow down introductions, but there's still some girls like Shizune,Kushina and Kurenai among others that I'd like to see in the harem. Hopefully you get the chance to add some of them when Sasuke returns to Konoha.

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm so sorry for not being able to review, but reallifew was hell in the past two weeks. I just inhaled the last 15 (????) Chapters! It's amazing how fast you write. And I certainly don't want this story to end any time soon. 

I wonder if some characters might use sexy no jutsu to become temporarily a woman in order to have sex with Sasuke? Since Naruto is a woman already? 

I also want to know if all  Uchiha are this well endowed​? Is Sasuke going to stumble on women with were Tobi's / Itachi's lovers and who tell a similar tale of Sasuke is doing? I bet in the end it all goes back to Madara again

person SxR
schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 

Well I just read the last 4 chapters today and I can really say they were very good, especially as you handled the relationship between Sasuke and Rias. I think it was also good to see a bit of romance, the only thing that is strange is that nobody is looking for Rias especially because it was part of the nobility in their world. Anyways good job.

P.S. I really hope to see a cat girl at some point, especially because of the relationship that kept the Uchiha clan with cats.

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I respect how you carrying on with the story not bad 

as always awesome chapter 

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The chapter till tsunami was good but after that with haiku I lost bit of a interest 😔

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Rias is getting pregnant hmm thought I expected someone else but I respect your work 

and damn yugao I forgot about her 

awesome chapter 🌚

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That Sasuke x konan was so good 😊 I just love the chemistry these two have I hope you build on these 2 for another chapter or two 

but as always great chapter 👌