You're just too quick. By the time I get to check to see if there's a new chapter, there seems to be two or three. Sorry for not having the time to review them all.
All in all, a good chapter with a nice throwback to an earlier time. A lot of people tend to forget the early years when writing stories like this.
So now we get more towards the crux of the plot. Now I believe my most interesting thought is in what order the next few women will be in. As in, who gets pregnant next.
As I've come to expect, you do not disappoint. I'm glad to see that you were still maintaining a high level of quality as well as a very fast update schedule. Congratulations on having almost as many views as many much longer established stories.
Nice chapter. New to this fic here and it's pretty solid so far especially with the lack of Sasuke fics. I did enjoy the crossover chapters and I honestly wouldn't mind if you added in a few more characters from other series. Not too many but just a few.
This is the first time I comment.
I'm really impressed by the speed and quality with which you write. I really like the fact that you add Rias to the story, you know it's hard to find stories of this kind and quality about Sasuke but it's even harder to find stories in which Sasuke interacts with characters from other series, so I really hope to see more Of Rias.
Well I really like the story. I really can't wait to see the next chapter.
it was a very good chapter. thank you. rias is an easily attractive crossover character.
Stick to what I said before. Variety is good, but I'd not recommend throwing in out of universe characters too often, or it ends up as an excuse to substitute originality for variety. I say personally that I prefer the former to the latter.
Otherwise, another good chapter. Keep it up!
Chapter 16 has copied itself. Where there is the chapter and then it appears again. I don't know the words to explain it but you should check it out.
Good chapter.
I didn't expect to see TenTen so soon, in fact I forgot she even existed. Still, nice to see attention to detail and a more comprehensive grasp of the females available.
I see Rias won the poll. I'm a little sad, since I voted for Rangiku:(
Still, it's a nice change of pace from the focus exclusively on Naruto characters, though I wouldn't recommend it too often. Perhaps 1 in 10 chapters?
Regardless, thanks for another good chapter and here's hoping for more.
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John
I had to actually google her to see who she was
overall great chapter and I wonder how you going to carry on the story from here