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The messenger of god has been brought to her knees 🌚🌝🌚🌝 

nice 👍 chapter thought I hope you implement more dirty talk 

Not bad of a chapter the lemons are great 🌚🌝

What about the kuro in earth village is she ever going to join? 

I was about to point it out but you already know about double posting 

I must say that this is an interesting story. Though, while I don't read every single chapter (I just have particular likes regarding lemons and what girls are in them), those that I did, really made an impression on me.

If I may be so bold and ask, will there be more Hinata in the future chapters? I don't mean that you make a Part 2 to this chapter (though I wouldn't mind), but even a short mention (or long) in another chapter would be cool. Especially if you made something kinkier with the shy Hyuuga, maybe her getting banged by several Sasukes at once (Kage Bunshin)? Or him doing some teasing/sexy torture on her, like tying her to a bed, nakend and blindfolded, and using various tools to make her climax several times, before finishing with an intense sex?

I really hope to see some more of Hinata here. She's my favorite character.

I do wonder who else you have in store for play 🌚🌝🌚

i likey lol 

2 birds 1 stone 🌚🌚🌚 

amazing chapter I can't stop reading it 

maybe it's something new 😐 

I hate how the sites sign me out like why? 

Double trouble nothing for Sasuke 

great chapter Hinata and sizune can't wait for those 🌝

I imagine naruko and Sasuke to be doing it like rabbits 

hope Hinata gets some character development but shy Hinata is still good or maybe road to ninja Hinata ? 🤔 

Ah kumo girls man I love there cocky ness 

tenten 🤔 Maybe they go on a mission to look for a sword or 🌚🌝

I don't know how I feel about cross overs though if you are going that way maybe esdeath from akame ga kill or azula from avatar 

also I hope there's one girl who will deny Sasuke the first time so he loses his shit that be jokes 

so how are you going to implement these characters from other anime 

i must be rambling a lot but 

maybe kaguya finds a way to come back to life and it opens different portals. 

I've been failing in my duty as a reader to review your story despite its great content and one of my habits is that I usually don't review unless I have a new idea or feel that the writer needs help which is also teling of how great this story is if I am not nagging. There have not been any noticeable complaints and the sex is good quality with suitable word length. As I am typing this out the one bit of nagging I do have is that the timing feels really off where some things that are supposed to take an hour or more are done and dealt with in some very quick minutes while the short quickies feel like they are pretty much at the same amount of words. It creates a sense of lost proportionality that is noticed after I finish reading like an anachronism might bug someone who notices it but does not remember what was anachronistic. This is probably just me who has a skewed sense of time. I am very capable of easily wasting several hours of my life waiting so it might not actually be an issue at all.

You have some great content and you've been consistent so those are amazing points. Your gender bending of people also suddenly opens up a lot of options if you make the stretch.