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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

in the future will you do mikot or fem!itachi?

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just made this account to review this story. First of all amazing chapter 🌚

Also you could try normal site fan fiction to catch more attention of the readers of harem stories 

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 2 I enjoyed it very much wasn't too fast paced or slow just the way I like. 

The storyline seems very good so far 

best point in this chapter drinking tea goes very well with the Sasuke in this story 

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter 🌚 

I hope you don't genderbend any characters or revive them back to life. 

It just ruins the story imo 

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That triple action was amazing well written can't wait to read other chapters 🌚😎

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

🌚🌚🌚🌚 the legendary sucker loses a another bet 

man that fem orochimaru nearly gave me a heart attack 😭😭😭😭

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Damn I should be going to sleep but the story is keep on getting better and better 

i like how this story is in line not skipped or jump ahead just for lemons 

schedule May 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow 🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝 the ending made me crack up though I wonder how konan survived 

schedule May 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 So, I came back to review this one since I didn't before. 

 Good chapter, and I like the way that you reinterpreted Gaara's personality.  It's been interesting reading every chapter and waiting to see who will feature in the next one. I still haven't forgotten about the cloud girls, and the hint you dropped. 

schedule May 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 I have to say, I'm a little upset we didn't get to see a more in-depth Naruko encounter this chapter. I'm waiting to see who will feature in the next chapter, especially if you think it may be a good one compared to the ones you've had so far. 

 I'm also thinking about how many female characters there are left. My money is on someone like Kushina pretty soon. 

Good chapter as usual. Keep up the good work.