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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

person redlox
schedule April 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

in the next couple chapters will you do a deflowering of Hinata chapter?

schedule April 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

will there be mikoto or fem itachi in the future?

person glk
schedule April 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good to know you're planning on using more Konoha women. That brings to mind another question, are you going to use minor characters like Fu or Shiho? What about filler or movie characters like Shion, Ameno or Shizuka? The Naruto series has tons of female characters you could use for a fic like this, so I'm hoping for some of the more obscure characters to get the spotlight too.

schedule April 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Not a problem, always happy to encourage good writers.

I can see what you mean though, something about this chapter just seems...off. I can't put my finger on it, even when I'm reading it. Hm. Food for thought.

Looking forward to the next one!

schedule April 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm just encouraging. I'm huge Sasuke Fan and you write him so well. Goods fics with him are rare and I'll do everything to get you keep writing. 

Now i just wonder if the girls gossip about Sasuke. Who is willing to share and who is the jealous type?

schedule April 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter, and it's funny to see Sasuke listing off his sexual partners to Naruko when we don't know how many of them know bout each other.

Gotta say, I created an account just to review this story since you expressed how much reviews mean to you. Hope this helps, and keep doing what you're doing, you're on a roll.

On a side note, your last chapter was a double feed.

schedule April 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Suggestion: At some point, have Sasuke make Tsume and/or Hana his bitch. Bonus points if one of the women walks in on him pounding the other.

person glk
schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The pace in which you update this fic is amazing. Please keep it up.

Hopefully you bring back Anko and have her actually have sex with Sasuke beyond just a blowjob.

I know Sasuke is going to leave the village soon, but could you still add more Konoha women to his harem like Shizune,Hinata or Kurenai? Maybe you could have Sasuke meet them during his travels and explain that they're away from the village because they're on a mission.

schedule April 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh I love how they're all lusting after Sasuke (and his cock). I wonder if that is an Uchiha thing? Madara seemed similarly build, after all. But that's just a headcanon of mine,.

schedule April 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm slowly starting to think that Sasuke is going to be reason why Naruto's time as Hokage was so peaceful. Satisfied Kunoichi is perfect diplomacy (unless they're fighting about him). I wonder if Kakashi is going to get request soon enough for Sasuke to visit this and that town again? Which would be hilarious, especially if Konoha has no clue that Sasuke is fucking is way through the continent.

Perfect capture of the characters, like always. I'm curious about Konan, though.