Hot damn, foursome already? You just skipped the threesome and headed straight for the foursome instead. XD
Honestly, I didn't really find Karui all that sexy. But that makes sense since she wasn't sexy that much, but rather a total bitch. Of course, glad that Sasuke showed her who's in charge by putting her in her place. And yeah, she beat Narut-I mean, NaruKo up. Payback's a bitch, and a bitch like her deserves a bitch.
Sasuke getting a little fatigued here since he's not used to having so many girls throw themselves at him at once makes sense. Once he's used to it, he can handle them all.
I like Sakura, but only if her bitchiness is not so profound. Hence why I don't like the Uzumaki Restoration one where she abuses her power and is a huge bitch to just about everyone, using Naruto's cock to make slaves of everyone else. But this one I am okay with cause its nice and sweet and she does have love.
Wow Sasuke, tell the girl that you're not exclusive to her AFTER you banged. You're lucky she's addicted to you.
Another great chapter for a great story, its awesome to see someone with your writing skills take an interest. Now that youre finished with this, you should consider different characters, you have been using Sasuke alot, but it would great to see not often used characters as MC, a story with Kiba for example would be cool
A fitiing and well put-together ending for the story. Also impressive for the size of the story and the time it took to complete. Bravo.
Welp, it was reaching that point and thankfully you have other stories in the line. There has been 40 days and more of enjoyment derived from this so thank you very much for creating a story of such great length. Rias with Sasuke's kid got lost after she was left Konoha so there were quite a few segments that were missed. I hope the epilogue sets things up for something else. Maybe the next generation picks up their parent's habits.
I will be sad to see this story go, but I look forward to what type of ending you'll create. Also, I suppose it would give you more time to work on your other Sasuke/Harem story, which I have prefered. All's well that ends well.
decided to fimally review: interesting Kushina chapter.
Really man, I'm dying here. Naruto has long twintails that are oftentimes forgotten when you randomly have Sasuke take her to town. Why hasn't he used them Handlebars yet? Cereal though, this chapter was great stuff. I think you've done more then enough setup for Sasuke to take them Bijuu and rock their worlds into Corporeality! Starting with the Kyuubi of course...
On a side note, like my comment in the discussion topic on the forums stated, drifting slightly into the idea of secondary characters for your Crossover characters might be a good idea. Granted I've made my case for Lucy pretty clear, but I bring this up here for the sake of the Bijuu and Rias... Why not pull out Kuroka considering Matatabi is also a Two Tailed Cat? It doesn't have to last forever, but just random plotlines that drift into how the worlds left behind are playing out while you run the main goal.
Can Tsunade come back?
Very good story , and as the 100 the reviewer I would like to ask for kushina to be added .