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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

schedule May 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Not alot of Sasuke harem stories out there so props to you for having the guts to write one. Looking forward to what comes next.

schedule May 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story! World needs more Sasuke/harem fics!

If you decide to do another, by any chance, could you add more delicious detail and make Sasuke's mannerisms more aligned with his canon aspect?

schedule May 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hey! 

You're other story brought me here as well. Maybe look into Poison Ivy, Wonder woman (Diana) or Harley? All strong women characters you could make to be frigid and man hating but subdued by cock?

 

have fun writing either way!

schedule May 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 I took a look at your poll, and I must say I'm interested to see who will be featured in this next chapter. Hopefully we can see it over the weekend! Although, I'm not going to tell you which one I voted for. 

 I wasn't much of a fan of this chapter although it may just be because it was relatively short.  I'm still favoring your other work, but this one is a good distraction to tide me over while the updates come.

 Best wishes. 

schedule May 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ah, so that's the one!! Yeah, love that pic too. Truth be told, I need to start re-commissioning some pics like that. Used to do those Sasuke/various girl panels from Tabe-chan, Kenno, Eridaiho, Jadenkaiba and ManiacPaint, just to name a few. Name on DA is blacxican and on fanfic it's whosajiggawhat.

And loved this new chapter. The week long sex-filled Tsunami was amazing but the one that took the cakek for me was Mabui. Bet you can imagine why. Looking forward to the next chapter to this and your other fic (which I need to review later)

person ElChapo
schedule May 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I was really glad that you included Robin again. I wouldn't mind seeing her more frequently lol. I also wouldn't mind a chapter kinda like the one that you just did with Mei again only this time with Tsunade. Or you very well good just do an orgy with multiple Shadow Clones and multiple women. Idk lol. I just prefer kinky over normal shit.

schedule May 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Such a wonderful story!!! I love how each female character responds to Sasuke and his sexual exploits. That being said, would really love to see some different scenarios. Examples being Sasuke fucking Hinata at the Hyuuga compound trying to keep her quite while her dad comes to check on her. Maybe before that, Hanabi joins in too. Also, maybe a feetjob from one of the females under a table while ours are around, none the wiser. Could also imagine a double blowjob working like that.

Also, I saw during the "Suprise" chapter a reviewer had mentioned a Sasuke harem picture that came to mind when reading this chapter, and that you agreed to this being a motivation for it. Mind saying which one it was?

person Gmon01
schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sorry, I'm new to the story, but which chapter does Sasuke start to fuck Tsunade?

schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Into the cannon nice chapter 

if you are reading this review could you recommend me some Sasuke stories he's my favourite character also 

schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Never seen the movie had to google it to find out who see was 

 

nice chaoter