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for The Lone Wanderer

by BigE2955

schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So Safe to say Sasuke can control all the 5 nations when naruko becomes the kage world domination 🌚 

Nice chapter I might give a read to the other story see how it is 

schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 I have to admit I was looking forward more to an update of your other story. I'm very interested to see who will feature next in it. Or the consequences of last chapter, I'm not too particular. 

 Otherwise I think this is another good chapter from you, and I hope to see more. 

person Zero336
schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I've been really enjoying keeping up with this and having a new chapter to read almost everyday. The only thing I would like more of is Tsunade but other than that keep up the great work. 

person ElChapo
schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yo nice job with the Mei portion. That was definitely my favorite lol and definitely a favorite to anyone who's into more kinky. Hell this whole chapter was lol. I loved it.

person ElChapo
schedule May 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoyed the Sasuke/Konan gangbang lol. Guess I'm just into more kinky shit.

schedule May 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice to see Konan again, though I'm now wondering what your ultimate plan for her is. We've seen the evolution of the harem hierarchy from simply one-and-one-and-one to a sort of tiered value.

I eagerly await what your goal is for this system and what form it will take at the end.

Can't say I'm also not wondering who the parents of the canon next generation are going to be. Him award is out, unless Sasuke is the father and Hinata the mother, not to mention the other kids.

My most anticipated event by far is the coronation/insemination (whichever comes first) of Naruko. Given your previous examples, it should be good.

Also waiting to see who features next in your other story.

Extra long review this time to compensate for the short one before.

schedule May 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Kurenai was waiting for this milf 🌚

Finally getting to read this story again 

schedule May 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Even though I'm not familiar with robin great chapter 

schedule May 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I thought it would be awkward for them but I guess not 

so when is shizune is going to be added 🤔

Nice chapter

person SPG
schedule May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

i vote for both fem. kyuubi and uzumaki kushina