AFF Fiction Portal
schedule May 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter.  I must say, kudos to you for making even a somewhat assholish Sasuke likeable in this fic.  Perhaps its the main character-effect, but still, I'm still digging the story.  Personally, I can't wait for the Naruko chapter myself...but good things take time to build and craft.  Seriously though, great work.  I can't wait for more. You're rather prolific in your output (something I sure as hell am not in my regular ff account), so i probably won't be waiting too long.

schedule May 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I greatly enjoy this story.  Perhaps a few years ago i wouldn't have read it due to rampant, unprecedented Sasuke-dislike on my end, but i quite like this one.  Sort of a pallet-cleanser for the massive harem genre with good writing and a likeable version of Sasuke as the protagonist.  I feel like you've done an excellent job with it so far; some of the scenes seem to progress or fly by a bit too quickly, but it works well and keeps with the flow of the story.  I mean, Sasuke has a shit load of women to get through in this new world after all.  Anyways, I'm looking forward to more, keep up the great work!

person zeek17
schedule May 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

One of the very few fics onthis site I actually like!

If Narutoko and Hinata are an item here, I'd like Sasuke to go at Hinata first, with Naruko aware and joining no sooner than next chapter or one after that.

person glk
schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So Kin and Tayuya are both dead on your other story? I wouldn't have mind them showing up on that one considering you haven't used the Sound Village much.

I haven't been posting much on this story because I don't like genderbending that much, but from what I read it's still really good. Keep it up!

person Shadow21
schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

They've hidden your other story which was a personal favorite of mine

person Gmon01
schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Okay, how the hell did your other story violate any terms of service?

schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What happened to the other story? 

If the site took it down that's some bullshit I say you come on FanFiction.Net and leave this one 

man I really hate people seriously getting jealous cuz we like Sasuke to be main in the story and not anyone else 

but anyways good luck fam hope I'll see you in future 

person ElChapo
schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hey this is adult fanfic and it's about an anime. No one's gonna judge lol. Hell people right rape on here too all the time. Doesn't mean they support it in real life. So no one's judging you my man. This chapter was probably my favorite so far. Still holding out hope for that Sasuke X Any Fictional verse, thing inside of this.

schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 I have to say I'm definitely liking the story more than the other one, if only for the fact that the chapters allow you to focus on a few people at a time rather than having to stuff a new character in every chapter. 

 I like to read more of the reactions of the characters than to just see an endless cavalcade of new characters that I can't really enjoy the situation with.

schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

 An interesting chapter and a good set up for a lot of expansion. I think, the most exciting part of this chapter for me was just the every day things that Sasuke does.  By this I'm referring to the office scene. 

 All in all, another good chapter. I think I may actually like this one more than the other one.