Me encanta la historia esta muy interesante una de las mejores
Great chapter
this was good, though it felt a bit rushed, i hope power trip is next i really want my amazon orgy or x mansion orgy
It was a fun read, but compared to your previous releases I feel as if it's lacking in content. You (both?) spent a bit too much effort painting the scene instead of telling the action.
No, that ain't right. There is nothing wrong with great detailing. But, I feel like you just wrote their location and positions, and then moved on. You didn't write much regarding the sex.
Then again, juggling a cast large enough for an orgy in one setting and scene can be difficult and tedious. Next time, try to limit the characters for a scene.
Also, I've enjoyed all your fics; especially since you actually pair Naruto with the kunoichi of the Konoha Twelve. You don't skimp out on them; thumbs up and props. However, I noticed that one character had yet to make an appearance at all.
Can Kurenai get some love?
Here’s an idea if you’re interested. Namely, have Hinata’s mother watch Naruto use his clones to gangbang Hinata, ripping her clothes to shreds in the process. Afterwards, Hinata decides that she likes being naked and fucked, and so becomes Naruto’s personal nudist fuck toy, and her mother approves and urges for a marriage between Hinata and Naruto. However, she also uses this as an excuse to have occasional visits to Naruto’s rod as well.
How’s that?
Good chapter bro
Are there going to be crossovers in this story?
What a chapter
this latest chapter was simply AMAZING i hope to see more naruto x kushina chapters like this one.
I'm a little confused on the timeline. At first, it reads similarly to canon where Naruto went through the Chuunin Exams and then left with Jiraiya to find Tsunade. However, when you start talking about Naruto fucking Shizune, it reads like Tsunade and Shizune have been in the village from the start and have known Naruto since before the exams. Then it goes back to being like canon and it's disorienting all over again. It's like you changed ideas several times and forgot to edit to make it all fit.