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for The Conquering Hero

by CyberXIII

person finny94
schedule August 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is truly magnificent. An absolutely amazingly depraved story that makes you hard every time you read it. The second chapter while shorter than the first, didn't disappoint. I really hope Ino gets more love in the future chapters. What was there was really hot, but just not enough for the blonde bombshell. I also hope Kushina gets involved at one point.

 

Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you, and good luck.

 

schedule July 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This was a great read, superbly detailed and and the dialogue is on point. It really is refreshing to come across a heterosexual Naruto oriented story with an author that actually makes an effort to detail the exposition's action and introspection.

My only hope for this is that all the woman featured are the kunoichi first before you write smut involving civilians. Too many stories I've read that derail and get abandoned because they focus on civilians or genderbends. I want to read about Mei and Tsunade together. Mikoto and Kushina as well.Hoping Konan makes an appearance. A foursome with Samui, Karui and Mabui.

And I hope it all culminates to Kaguya. Really wish to read Naruto x Kaguya smut/romance. Such a rare pairing with so much potential.

If such a pairing is to be written by a writer with skills and attention to detail...

I'll be content.

I'm really tired of coming across detailed smut with obnoxious dialogue that makes the story feel like a bad porno. I'm also tired of all the Sasuke oriented stories and cuckold. Tired of all the yaoi as well.

schedule July 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sort of dissapointed that Kushina didn't take a peak at her kids fucking at the end there. Ah well, time enough for that to happen in chapter 3.

 

.... wait is that seal thing Tsunade put on Naurto so he fires blanks still active or was that only when they were doing it? Hope it is, otherwise Kushina's probably going to be a grandma soon enough.

schedule July 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing love the details can hardly wait for Kushina a lovely MILF keep up the amazing work.

schedule July 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What a chapter 

schedule July 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story as usual, everything you write is so hot

schedule June 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very nice and sexy stuff. Also, will you make the growing girls bustier? 

schedule June 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is Niiiiiceee. Though I've got to be honest, I think giving numbers to Naruto's massive size would be a nice touch. Well, eventually. though given that he's been compared to farm animals probably measn that it would fit the "literal thrid leg" category.

... That his spunk has reguvinating and, if I'm reading between the lines right, semi-addictive properties was a VERY nice touch though. 

@CompassOpposites got an ETA on the next chapter of that Incubus prince naruto story of yours by the way?

person Cakei5
schedule June 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Whoa a vey good fic and is very very large continue this history Is very good.

Keep the good work.

person Cakei5
schedule June 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

O and include heir sister and his mother Kushina please.