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for The Conquering Hero

by CyberXIII

schedule May 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I don't know what it is about extremely active and well endowed shoutas that I love. I think it's three parts. 1. It's kinda funny. 2. It's like the ultimate "good job bro" 3. And it's a sort of a twisted vicarious living, basically like having a perverted super power. That's it...

anyway the story is great almost didn't bother since it only had one chapter but I'm happy the summary drew me in. My only issue being that in the narutoverse he's not really a shouts right? If we go by old enough to kill old enough to drink old enough to fuck logic... whatever, I can't wait til the next chapter

thx ;)

person Zenkichi
schedule May 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please continue this story. It's so rare to see a Naruto fic where Naruto isn't getting screwed or fucked (male or female), or its about him.

schedule May 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter, looking forward to seeing more in the future. Although, I'm not big on NTR, TBH, so I wouldn't get much out of that challenge of yours.

Admittedly, I almost thought that when Naruto ripped off Mikoto's bottom, he was going to shove his length up her ass. Would like to see that sometime, if you can manage it.

Good luck!

schedule May 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good start, keep it up I look forward to Kushina and his sisters turn. 

schedule May 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Interesting story look forward to more 

schedule May 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

An interesting challenge, and one you seem well on the way to meeting. I llok forward to seeing where this story goes.

schedule May 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is hot and I want more please. The generic oversizing of everything gets biring after a short while, but it fits with the attitude of the story.

schedule May 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very nice. Suggestions: Hana having to deepthroat Naruto after walking in on him pounding her mother's ass (or vice versa), Naruto "interrogating" enemy kunoichi (Kin, Tayuya, Guren, Konan, Suzumebachi etc), Mebuki giving Naruto a try after seeing the state he left Sakura in, and Naruto showing Yoshino the pleasures of a lover that isn't lazy.

schedule May 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Dayum good stuff cant wait for Kushina's turn thank you for something that isnt Sasuke