You asked for an honest opinion of this chapter, so I'll give it. This isn't a terrible chapter. But it is very much a filler chapter and after so long without an update it feels underwhelming. Nothing really happened here beyond you refering to loose ends that were tied up and then a vague Sasuke/Hinata lemon.
Very exciting fresh take but it also felt short and like the intermission chap. So bring me more cause it aint enough
The new Uchiha residence is awesome. Sasuke really pays attention to detail #headboard #beadsprings ,He did not really fuck Hinata but really made love to her ,which was also quiet nicely done ,but it was shorter and much less detailed and dialouged than usual which hopefully can be fixed ,cause they are my fav fetish pairing. Update soon bro
Like half of this entire fic has intermission chapters. Still waiting for a knockout chapter in this fic ...
Does this mean your gona take things up a notch from now on ?
I love it ! its too short though
an interesting direction ... I look forward to more.
oh look another story from bigE where Sasuke is a sex god and naruto is just a sad little boy
i wonder if you sti in your chair masturbating your tiny little microdick while staring at sasuke you fucking faggot
only edgy losers like OMG SO DARK characters like sasuke
i guess we know what you are
Has not had good chapter in this fic for a while now ,still waiting for one
Sakura always gets the shortest end of the stick in this fic , I truly hope you let her shine in LL&F.