Needs better characterization ,let their individual personalities ,thoughts and feelings shine. Its lame when they just behave as sasukes whore puppets. Include scenes that relate to the pregnancies. e.g. Checkup with Naruto tagging along. Keep us updated on those dattebayo !Naruto is there also but its also like he aint inluded in the fun stuff ...
Perfect Sex Toy - The two bells Naruto and Sasuke worked together as team to get from Kakashi. Hinata in missionary with the bells tied to her ankles would make a wonderful sound with each thrust.
Perfect Sex Jutsu - The Chidori . Does Naruto still have the scar from when Sasuke plunged it into his chest ? It would be pretty hot him stimulating her clitoris in reverse cowgirl in full veiw for her beloved .
Forgot to mention - wedding ring - wedding kimono and a whole lot of love
Dnt make it boring where all the fetish stuff is basically normal to them.
Sasuke needs to bend hinata over the hokages desk while he out
sarada cucking boruto could be quiet erotic too.
Did naruto miss the fact that hinata knew sasuke wanted to sleep with her because of the rivalry but did it anyway. The rivalry is always a hot topic. I wana know what hinata thinks about it .from genin days to now . how they have measured up since the start till now in her eyes. Mistress Sakura could join her along with the younger girls. Sakura and hinata share memories with the younger ones about the rivalry. .... Including how funny Sai always is
To be continued ... Man do not play theses games ,need to see this shit through.
Excellent update, I was more interested in Himawari going into this but seeing how you've set things up I think I might even be more interested in Naruko. That said, I suppose I'll have to wait because Naruko would be the end of the story.
PS - Why doesn't Sasuke get Sarada pregnant?
I remember you once said that you don't hate naruto but after reading your story it is hard for me to believe that you dont hate him. You take some sick pleasure in humiliating an mc of an anime maybe you potray yourself as him. Its just my opinion though not a fact maybe I'm right maybe I'm wrong. I admit I found these stories arousing at first but now I'm glad I have finally come to senses. It's so sad really you have great talent in writing stories but to utterly destroy naruto like that...... it's disrespectful to the fans and yourslef as well. I hope in future you make stories that don't involve cheating or humiliation of this degree.