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for Naruto's Fetish

by BigE2955

person Anonymous
schedule April 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great read. Glad to see you're really stepping up the breeding.

Jokes aside, it is good to see you branching out. I feel like in comparison to Hinata all the other girls are relatively shafted. Hima appears and gets impregnated, but drops off the map after that. Sarada and Naruko were kind of end game and so not really developed. You're fleshing out their development in these new updates, which is ace.

schedule April 22, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Also, sorry for not saying this in my earlier review, but I see you took that suggestion of mine I PMed you on FF.net. :D

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

What a happy family, yes Boruto, living on your own is hard lol, Sarada is so naughty and Naruko is still amazing, on to the next!

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hinata is a bigger slut than I have come to terms with, not that its a bad thingat all! Hmm, maybe its because Himawari and Sarada are best girls, but Hinata does not feel all that special anymore. It was still hot, they almost got caught! On to the next

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Not much to say on this one, it was hot as usual, christmasy, Sarada and Hima are still the most adorable things ever, and Hinata is at a level beyond cumslut, thats amazing lol.

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Sasuke's lazy day was still a pretty great day. I need a full story with Sarada being main girl for Sasuke, it's freaking intoxicating. Sakura still doesn't know lol, Hima and Sara are best cheerleaders for Sasuke as well, and Naruko is such a good girl, she deserves all the action she gets. What a trip, I love every chapter and it all paced nicely and worked perfectly. 10/10 gonna read again. But for now, on to your other works of art!

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh shit. Oh shit. Oh shit. This chapter...the build, the moment, the resolve...yes..THIS was the best chapter and Naruto is officially best girl.

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

If you would have told me I would come to eventually prefer Sasuke and Naruto together over Sasuke and Hinata when I started reading, I would have laughed in your face. But here we are. Naruko needs to be permanent.

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ohhhh SHeeeeiiitttttt. Sakura missing her husband, adorable moment for Naruto and Hinata, cute Hima and Sarada....OhhhSheeeit.

person SenzaUchiha
schedule April 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ohhh Sarada...Sarada....Sarada. Welcome to the good life. The was hotter than it had any right to be. Need more Sarada in my life.