Nice ending.
I dont really like sasuke centered stories but this story is very good.
Loved the latest chapter. Just a quick idea kinky idea. Why not have Naruko purposely make her form more closely resemble Kushina, so that Sasuke can sort of also dominate Naruto's mom and taunt her with it in a wierd sort of way? That would be an easy way to add another "character" to this fic without having to extend the harem further and make it ridiculous.
" He leaned down to kiss her on the lips - but she tilted her head slightly, so he merely brushed her cheek. "
Holy shit dude. You can just feel Naruto's marriage break into a billion pieces at that moment.
Aside from that, I enjoyed the submissiveness and impregnantion in Hima's scene. That said, it could have really been played up. She mentions that she might never be as important as Sakura or as sexy as Hinata - it's a bit of slave mentality, and it would have been nice to see that explored for the degradation factor.
' her mouth already full of cock. '
Ah you just had to fucking go there didn't you.
That said, this chapter actually aroused me. That blowjob was pretty top tier stuff, and the actual dirty talk suited. Sasuke and Naruto have always had a contentious relationship. The struggle for dominance is one of the counterpoints in the series. To be so decisively defeated..
Noice.
I really liked this chapter. It's a bit light on the smut but more than anything it really illustrates Naruto breaking down. He's so utterly consumed by his fetish now that his thoughts have become irrational. Most people would agree Sasuke is taking advantage of them all to satiate himself, but he is starting to legitimately inwardly see Sasuke as some sort of savior figure.
We have descended. Hinata's humiliation talk is really stepping the cuck game up.
I also enjoyed the Himawari pregnancy scene and discussion. It's not meant to be a realistic fic, but it's a breath of fresh air that helps keep it from being solely about penis A in slot B.
Now this is what I call incest. Properly depraved and all. We need some of this perspective when you write your Sasuke/Mikoto smut.
I think in this story Naruko is the only one that gets completely and utterly broken. And I'm okay with that. Considering it's 'Naruto's Fetish' it would seem like that would be the crowning moment of glory. All I can say is that I wish that scene was longer.
That said, having the four year old kids dildoing up their mom's pussy to keep the cum in is a bit...eh.
Was this originally supposed to be a oneshot? I don't remember this from the first time reading this. Maybe I just missed it.
I think I might like this Himawari better than the one in the Remastered version. She's more aggressive there, but I think this one fits in better with the cuck theme. Sasuke is the bull coming in a taking, as opposed to being railroaded into an ever growing clusterfuck just to keep it a secret.