Meh
So wholesome.
12/10
I’m usually a silent reader and I should probably start changing that by commenting on the most recent chapter. I’ve been pretty okay with any direction you decide that this story takes but this chapter surprised me in a good way and I’m genuinely looking forward to what happens after “this”. I didn’t see that one coming but I was pleasantly surprised and enjoyed this more than I thought I would.
Also when you mentioned the mating press you know it’s real lol.
Use the mating press on Hinata !
Needs a smidge more sph and cuck. Also the get boring and autonomous without suffient dialogue ,wanna see a bit more reasoning.
I decided to read your stories since I read your reviews on Kage Sexbomb and I gotta say man you’re really a hypocrite. Do you know that? First you commented on Sniper Joe’s story acting like you’re an expert.
So what? Just because you made a couple of Fics of your boyfriend sasgay now makes you a expert? Gtfoh
i find it funny how you said “We're on a website called 'Adult Fanfiction'. 'Porn' doesn't necessarily mean that it has to suffer a complete lack of logic and good story telling. The best kind of porn is the kind that can sweep you away and engross you.” And yet your story has sasuke fucking hinata tell him she still loves naruto and yet she keeps getting fucked by sasuke. What kind of knowledge is that? Bro you’re obviously a sasuke fan boy that can’t stand having their precious boyfriend being cucked. Seeing how you make fanfics of your boyfriend being a sex god at the same time don’t want to cuck sasuke because you can’t “see him being cucked” proves my point.
Big e stories: naruto is a loving husband that lets his best friend fucks his wife and he lets himself be humiliated. (And you seriously go to other people’s fic and criticize while ignoring your stories’ flaws? Bitch please)
last thing. Don’t say that you don’t make money off of it when your broke ass be making money off of it on Hentai Foundry. Get out of your moms internet and WiFi and get your ass a job
Looks like the author is showing their fetish of wanting to fuck Sasuke in this chapter since he’s trying to get Sasuke and Naruto romantically involved.
Great story keep it up
"thank god this guy I am probably going homo for can transform into a hot girl, now I have plausible deniability if anyone ask if I'm a faggot"
Chapter 21 Sasuke in a nutshell
pretty hot, story's pretty good