Okay ... I understand the cuck fetish, but if it turns into a gay love thing then its going to destroy this entire fic for me dude...
This was a somewhat fun chapter, letting me see that it hasn’t been cancelled.
I really do wish people could start reviewing the story rather than flinging personal critique though... it’s kind of childish. Everyone has their own preferences :/
mhmm ... hinatas kisses are the best .we need some pov on her. need to know what she thinks when she shows some love to naru. hina could take pics of his crotch and stick them all over the kunoichi lockeroom .
Uchiha Neiji ? Have not even seen him yet. You let me down not keeping up to date with the pregnancies, they could be utalized so well in the plot as well as smut situations. Please do not do the same with Hinata.
sissy bastard
another please !
Very nice edition. What if the real Naruko was on her knees servicing the Uchiha with all the girls present and someone decides to startle Naruko causing her to drop the henge and back into her male form while her lips were pressed against his crotch and Sasuke is at the point of no return ,blue eyes looking into hhis Sasuke orgasms ...
This is just what I feared when I wrote my last review. The gay subtext in this story has just become plain text.
You've reminded me of a doujin I read a long time ago where a guy steals and mind breaks his best friend's girlfriend, but then it turns out the big twist at the end is that the bad guy never cared about the girl, was gay, and was yandere style in love with his best friend, and had only turned his friend's girlfriend into a whore to get rid of her as competition so he could have him. At least that gay guy wasn't lying to himself.
I don't mind the NTR, it fits really well with Naruto being canonically a pathetic doormat and Sasuke being a textbook sociopath, but this thinly veiled faggotry cannot stand. Please move this story to "Yaoi - Male/Male" where it belongs. Miss me with that gay shit.
really loved this one ,gona go read the rest now
Aw Hinata needs to be more vocal. She was so perfect at the start.