Hinata needs to get her act together! xD
The first chapter was lots of fun and I especially like when Naruto and Satsuki finally "got together."
Need to see more of this man. Love seeing a Satsuki lemon. Don't think I've seen a Satsuki Naruto lemon where Naruto cheats on Hinata. What is the Uchiha's bust size?
This is like one of the best things I’ve read in such a long time.
So fucking good. I need moreeeeee
The second time around this is actuallly... alright. Naruto is a cheating bastard of course, but he's a sympathetic one. You do pretty well in getting the reader on his side rather than Hinata's. The only thing you need is a bit of Satsuki's POV. Get inside her head a bit too.
That taste of tomato's thing was top kek. Hinata accidentally gets smacked up with Satsuki's dried pussy juice.
Also I wasn't sure what's up with Naruto's dick. 8.5 inches? Shouldn't it be like 16 at least?
Hinata the cuckqueen, heh. This could get really interesting or really weird.
Also an interesting take on Naruto and hating Iwa. He's obviously getting emotionally invested and it's impacting his work life.
Nice chapter
Well this is a good chapter keep up the good work .
Loving this fic. Kind of want Naruto and Satsuki to further humilate and debase Hinata.