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by BigE2955

person DevviKat
schedule January 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hinata being written as such a sexual, unapologetic character is amazing. The manga would be much more interesting if they portrayed her how you do here. I thought it was adorable that Himawari dresses like her mother and that Boruto is super protective of them both. My favorite part was the bj with Kiba ;)

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hinata strikes me as a bit sociopathic here. I'm actually a little disturbed. I suppose my main question would be if Naruto knows what kind of slut she is.

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This chapter raises worldbuilding questions. Is this a shinobi society? The schooling structure kind of implies not.

...Iruka, you dirty bastard.

person Anonymous
schedule July 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What a dirty little slut Hinata is, love it!

person MILFy
schedule July 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow I've never read anything like this before, I love the concept, the fact that Hinata isn't "broken" but just loves cock is unique. I'd love to see what you have in store for this, I wonder if Naruto knows she cheats on him, maybe he doesn't know the details, but knows she sleeps around, I doubt the kids would know though. I hope Hinata gets really depraved as time goes on, getting gang banged in the TV station bathroom by anyone and everyone. This really is one of the most interesting concepts for a story I've seen, I really hope it continues.

person Dai
schedule July 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So basically a completely slutty Hinata in a modern day world that was corrupting her daughter. She's clearly doing these on purpose and realisitically would get fired, but this is fiction so they let things go cause ratings man. XD

But now I wonder, does Naruto even know that his wife cheats on him? 

person Dai
schedule July 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well, Hinata's a full blown whore here, using her body to get Boruto's grades up. Just noticed there was no dick measuring here much. Like she wasn't comparing Kiba or Iruka's dicks with Naruto's, despite Hinata saying that Naruto was big. 

Wonder how many more fuck buddies she's got under her thumb and whether Naruto reveals to know or finds himself being in the dark of her more slutty nature with other men?

person ninjaxxx
schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice story.

Love all your stories. But i was wondering if you can make naruto the bull in the next story. 

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You brought me back with loveless and lost me again with this one just what is it with people dumping on naruto 

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

have to say its different. cant  wait to see what happens in the next chap