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for The Restoration of the Uzumaki Clan

by BigE2955

schedule November 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another good chapter, although I wish you’d go into more depth as to why Sakura is so mean to her subs. 

 

Anyways if you want my honest opinion, I wish you’d take less commissions at the same time so you could write and finish stories faster. I would love this one to be update more.

person Ninjaxx
schedule November 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice story!!

Maybe add tsume to complete kiba humuliation

person randompervert
schedule October 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please continue....

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I had very low expectations going into this, but it was actually alright. I didn't mind it. You've actually interested me in the backstory. Sasuke died heroically apparently, and I wonder how. Tsunade is a cockslut, but how? Makes me want to find out.

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What the fuck even was this chapter

Kiba is even more of a meme than he is in canon, lol.

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You know, I don't think I've ever seen Mebuki put in a harem. She's just so... plain and not at all aesthetic that most people wouldn't even reference her. It's kind of interesting that you did.

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was.. bizarre. Locked in a closet as a sex slave to be used in a personal glory hole? Very weird but interesting. I kind of liked it.

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wew, I'm really starting to like this closet thing. I think you gave me a new fetish.

schedule October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I still can't get over how manipulative and clever Sakura is, while be so fucking sadistic.

person Anonymous
schedule September 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It would be great if the story had some bi element. I mean, it's already close enough, maybe if kiba or asuma could prep naruto instead of their significant other, or maybe clean him instead.