rate_review Reviews

A great start to the story

From the looks of it and the allusion of her having had sex with that rando guy, I'm super bummed that Sakura won't be a conquest. But I digress.

This was insanely good. Your formatting, grammar and spelling were very good. Can't say near perfect as there were a few instances of a word missing in a sentence making it where I had to insert the word myself. But that was few and I don't recall seeing any punctuation or spelling errors.

Anyaays, keep up the fantastic job and spread the pregnancies around!