Really liked the focus being on Sasuke Naruto and Hinata in this chapter. The other characters like Himwari Sarada and Sakura should deffinatly be in this fic but should stay secondary characters.
Nice chapter, hopefully hinata spend some time with Sakura.
Something that I felt was missing in the original:
It would probably make sense for Sasuke to ask / manipulate Hinata to femdom Naruto (or Naruko). As for Sasuke's plans making a chain of command with Hinata above Naruto makes a lot of sense.
The decrease speed and changed timeline of the remastered fic is really better, but I was a little horngry waiting for Naruto's humiliation to take a next step. Finally!
One thing I'd like to see improved: Himawari's importance to the story. In this chapter that basically happened a little, because Himawari is the reason Sasuke is upping his game with Naruto and Hinata. More plot intersection like that please! :D
Really good except the part with Naruto still in his male form jacking Sasuke off. Gets kind of weird when you have Sasuke have Naruto do things like that in his male form when your supposedly writing Sasuke as strait.
I'll be honest, when Sasuke said someone had the honor to get him hard, I thought it'd be Naruto who did it. Now I'm just wondering how long it'll be before Naruto starts servicing Sasuke in his Oiroke no Jutsu form. And we know it's gonna happen sooner or later.
I'm also wondering if Sasuke is gonna get 'Naruko' pregnant in the remastered version compared to the original.
When will you update Loveless?
This is finally getting interesting! About time the cuck was humiliated like that! Do it some more in the next hcap pls!?
More twisted and depraved, now you are talking my language.
Chapter 10 and still hardly any sakura