Why would Sasuke and Hinata cheat on their spouses? This is just ridiculous. I hope Naruto and Sakura find out and Sakura beats the crap out of them (especially Hinata, she's the worst in this story).
i hope hinata and Himawari get pregnant at the same time so they can tell naruto together
So no where in narutos mind he is thinking about how small he is compared to sasuke at all and how he should be ashamed on his size?????? I mean afew times is alright but it seems like this is happening quite constantly, I think its about time hinata had a break from sasuke and that could ultimately start the distance between husband and wife with naruto starting to see the consequence he has put on hisself,also ice been meaning to ask why isn't naruto skilled in bed?? He was trained by TWO pervs he seems to be focused more on his fetish then anything else, and could sakura actually be in the next chapter with naruto, I mean sure sasuke would of told sakura about narutos size but maybe she could do something else like a prostate massarge for example as naruto watch's sasuke go at it with hinata.
Good, Hinata finally apologized for her bitchy move there. I'm still a little peeved she did that, even though I get somewhat what she was trying to do.
Apart from that, the way you described going inside the womb was fantastic. I wasn't able to figure out how to get that into words, but this helps a lot. And it seems like Naruto is also realizing his own inadequency and Hinata is finally succumbing to her urges.
Himawari is a slutty devil. Looks like she actually iherited her mother's inner slutty self. They do say the quiet ones hold the most slutty side to them. Now Sasuke has to consider the possibility that his "niece" badly wants to ride Sasuke's huge cock and get knocked up by it. Well, she will have to get in line.
Yeah, this is turning into a SasuHina/SasuHyuuga fic. There have been too much of those lately. No thanks.
Pretty nice but soft... Hope we get to see real fucking soon ;3
A truly disgusting story. If you're so fond of that black haired emo, just write Harem stories, idiot.
It seems you are trying to make Sasuke respect his friendship with Naruto. If going to continue down that line and have Sasuke act truly like Naruto's best friend might want to consider instead of turning Hinata in a cum-dump for the Uchiha, have him repay Naruto for all the time that his friend never gave up on him. Like the last chapter, Sasuke uses the Sharingan to erase all memories and return things back to normal and such. Even erase Naruto's fetish. A final way to even the score between them instead of having Sasuke end up taking everything.
Either way, your writing is good and this version of the story is more realistic than the last one. I am enjoying it.
Honestly, seems far more realistic than the last one did. I assume it's gonna follow the same plot though and end up with Naruto being...happy?...To see his daughter fucked by his friend? I mean, I know this is a porn site and all but when you're exploring a fetish like this you do kinda have to take a step back and think about how it would realistically affect them. Would upgrade the fic from pointless forgetable porn to half-decent erotica. Like, can Naruto afford to have his fetish take over his life? Is Naruto the kind of character who values sexual pleasure over everything else he's accomplished? In the other story you had him turn into such a cum-slut that he gives up being Hokage....That's bashing territory, and any bashing kind of instantly ruins a story. I personally think you gotta keep it a little realistic. Ok, Naruto likes watching Sasuke fuck Hinata, maybe he even likes to be fucked in his female form, but his best friend impregnating his daughter and turning her into a slut? Giving up everything he's ever worked towards (at one point, DYING for it) because Sasuke's a good fuck? Hell I think at that point Sasuke would throw him to the Yamanaka's or into Tsukuyomi for a psych eval. Also with the size thing...why can't Naruto be, y'know, average? maybe even slightly above average. Sasuke's cock seems to be what, 13 inches anyway? At that point does Naruto really have to be absolutely hopeless at sex? Might be negative memories from that other NTR Naruto fic on this site, but it seems a bit much.
Sorry if my previous review seemed blunt, I didn't mean it to come off that way, I just didn't think Hinata was one to be rude to someone like that. So Hinata, Himawari and Naruko will all be fucked by Sasuke again then? I'm interested, what made you decide to remaster the story? It feels like this is kinda going down the same route.