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for The Lone Traveler

by BigE2955

person Randomness
schedule January 29, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hmph, nice job with ending this arc. Hell, that crew is in for a shock if Robin's plan works. Keep doing what you do and enjoy yourself.

person Tralala
schedule January 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Nice sequel for lone wanderer. I wonder, though, if Sasuke wanted to break Nami, shouldn't his slow pace be better suited for it?

Would like to see more chakra application in sex - with lightnings, electricity and illusions that increase sensetivity and such.

P.S. Would you update on other sites?

person ElChapo
schedule January 19, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter as always bro. Really hoping to see Boa Hancock make an appearance at some point in the One Piece arc. Hope you update soon bro.

person digger
schedule January 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Can he have not common girls like monet or shalulia since that is hardly done and since he is in one piece now.

person Elio
schedule January 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Nice job Nami went down like I expected but it ended up being more intense than I expected but kind of disappointed that we didn't get a clue on the next girl still though nice work.

person Randomness
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Awesome work on this chapter. Keep it up.

person Literally Hitler
schedule January 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good update. I was a bit worried that Sasuke would get bretty ruff based on the discussions we had about him getting all pissed off, but this was ideal. Him being irritated but still confident and in control.

person BigHurt
schedule January 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yess finally a Nami chapter. I’ve been waiting so long and it turned out great!  Keep up the great work. 

person supermanwithpants
schedule January 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Focous on NARUTOS FETISH original and REMASTERD PLZ !!!
person atkbar
schedule January 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Aren't you getting tired of writing this kind of fics? You've been rehashing the same Sasuke stuff over and over. Why can't you focus on other where Sasuke is not your center of the universe...