I don't know why but I really enjoy this story please continue
Please continue this!
Sasgay ? but in the anime sasuke was always after power and revenge and after he kicked naruto to the curb naruto followed him everywhere like a sissyboy moaning out sasukes name like a female in heat . or did watch the Wrong anime lol ?
AND here’s where your true fetish pops up in this story by having Sasuke being the dominant one against Kushina when you could’ve done something new by having Kushina being the dominant one and Sasuke left on the bed panting and not being able to keep up with Kushina.
Shows how much you want Sasuke to dominate you in real life! LOL
You kind of built up hype to this chap then it fizziled
Do not use the word 'fat' when describing a penis, it just sounds wrong, maybe try words like thick, long, girth, etc. Just not 'fat' .
Not bad ,not the best either ,prefer it when you write in a more 'realistic pov' . Cause it feels like brain mush when its all fuck fuck fuck rushed porno. Small idea for a story ...Minato n Kushi r alive and Naruto was born with an older beautiful sister Naruko. They are a pretty straight laced family except for a secret reserved to the siblings ... sweaty sticky lust filled love. Naruto growing up into a young man always admired and noticed how perfect she was in every way. Naruko noticed his attentions as well ...and sometimes used it to her advantage till they both give into unquenchible desire. Naruto is a handsome wildchild who never gives much attention to any female ,except the sister he loves more than life itself. Naruko in the same boat ,she has a hold on naruto that not even there parenparents can figure out.
Yay your alive !!! narutos fetish nxt plz
Well that was kind of obvious ,I mean he is The Uchiha.
dirty talk would be great during intercourse ,not plain scream fucking. Just my meaningless opinion.