Mei was utterly top tier. He aggressiveness, her banter, her fantasies. I generally enjoy the smut but I'd have to say that out of the entire story that was probably the second best lemon. It got my fetishes burning, and it makes me wonder if at some point we really will see a Kage Summit arc where Sasuke puts the Raikage in his place.
We're coming on the end which makes me really sad. Now that you've actually throw Naruko down as this shy girl when it comes to actual intimacy it makes me really want to see emotional interactions between them. Sakura is so up front about her feelings and Satsuki had developed feelings over time, but I feel like Naruko is the best of both worlds. She's got all that devotion Sakura does but it's hidden and has to be revealed over time. Like I would suspect she was in love with Sasuke all along and just didn't want to admit it, and forcing her to confront it is very cute.
I still get a good laugh at that anal waterfall thing. The logistics would make it pretty dirty. Anyway, this is a really hateful place to stop writing this fic. It's very obvious that things will be coming to a head in the next chapter with Kushina and it's a cliffhanger that leaves us at the edge of our seats. Will Sasuke win and break Kushina? Will she put the fear of the strap on in him? Will they tie and push the conflict further down the road?
I love good Sasuke stories, and your's are the best.
The only thing I'd like to see more of are impregnations(especialy in harem and cuckold stories).
Anyways, great stuff, keep up the good work.
Another great and smutty story! The anal cum waterfall gave quite an image.
It seems Sasuke is a little slow in picking up the complications of his condition. I can hardly wait for the lesson Kushina has planned for him. I'm also wondering that it hasn't occured to him that giving Uchiha DNA to Mei will cause serious political problems. Wouldn't even a sixteen year-old Uchiha know the prohibition against giving away the sharingan to another village?
Also curious to see Kushina's reaction to Naruko being one of Sasuke's girls. That has some interesting potential.
Anyway, thanks for sharing the great story. Keep up the good work :)
The latest chapter, chapter 11, was quite a doozy. That being said, there were some highlights, some points that could be contradictory, and as per usual, some amazingly kinky smut.
We'll start with the contradiction first. In this chapter, Sasuke's show of restraint in regards to his two female team mates was interesting, definitely justifiable, though a little odd compared to how he'd normally break a woman. That being said, you rounded it up, stated the reasoning quite well, and defined the difference between a totally broken woman, a sight we would see later, and a half-broken slut like Naruko.
The highlights of this story were definitely found in the beginning, with the end of their mission to Kirigakure, within the Uchiha compound, as well as inside of the Uzumaki residence. Naruko almost busting her mother for having cum in her hair was a true classic; as was the way Itachi was forced to give up her virgin asshole.
Getting onto the actual kinkiness of the chapter, I really liked the anal scenes, as well as Kushina's apparent disregard about training Ino, Satsuki and Itachi on how to properly slurp a cunt. The absolute highlight of the smut was, without a doubt, when Sasuke unloaded inside of Itachi's formerly virgin ass, only for Kushina to drop down behind the female Uchiha's rear to accept a very different kind of facial; one that came rushing out in the form of a rushing waterfall from Itachi's ruined asshole.
Overall conclusion? It was a solid chapter, with a few teasing hints of what may or may not happen within the various households of the village. From this alone, there may come a time wherein Kushina introduces Naruko to the joys of being submissive, or for Ino to accept a more thorough physical with her raven haired lover.
The various scenes did seem a little off though. The smut was nice, though maybe a little quick, and the warning scene in Kushina's bedroom could have been a little more detailed, in my opinion. Then again, it wasn't bad.
Narutos Fetish ! this was ok
another great chapter. one question though, are ever gonna continue "loveless"?
Not bad but this feels like a filler fic dude ...
Lust love n friendship next