Good Chapter. Update.......Kek! Itachi is a such a good sister, doing things for Sasuke that is against who she is. Satsuki's transformation sounded sexy. I got a thing for purple hair after all. Danm, Itachi is a trooper, taking that much dick and powering through...poor Satsuki! She deserves justice. Sasuke, things wont ever be normal again, but normal is overrated! On to the next.
And here we have the tale of an incubus...the very definition of sex and seduction! A massive cock that knows no equal! And Mikoto took it like a champ. Mommy always knows best after all. Despite Mikotos amazing achievement....it's Satsuki who stole the show...for that tiny mouth to take that monster...that girl has a very bright future ahead of her! On to the next!
Itachi stared. And stared. And stared. Kek! Itachi probably deserves a prize for that, she took to her duty as a good older sister! Kushina and Mikoto huh, kinda bummed Sasuke didn't plow Kushina then and there but best things come in time I guess. On to the next!
I love the idea of Sasuke having a twin. This is a very interesting concept! And I love how his twin is a lot like Naruto. It's too cute!
Round Two!
I enjoyed the training scene very much. You nailed Kakashi's teaching technique (if it can even be called that) wonderfully. Reading smut and expecting his student(s) to do everything on their own. Five Chidori's is impressive, too. I'm happy that Sasuke isn't too weak in this story.
A Naruto-like twin sister is amazing! I love how bubbly she is, and the way you describe her is sexy, especially in her short shots. Her greeting him with a tackle hug was super duper cute! And it really expresses how close they are, even before all the smutty bits.
I'm already a fan of Mikoto! Her slutty, succubus persona is fantastic! I love caring mommies who do whatever it takes to please their children! I feel like the way you describe her body is deliciously yummy! She sounds like a juicy MILF! And her carefully milking Sasuke's semen out of him on his first time was precious.
I also really enjoyed the blowjob from Sastuki! "I learned it from your sensei's books"!!! So innocently sexy! I particularly liked how she commented on how full her belly was from his ejaculation.
You obviously know what you're doing when it comes to great incest smut, and I look forward to reading the next chapter, senpai!
Also, your grammar and punctuation are spot on, and your sentence structuring is well polished. Great work of smut here, Mr. Pervert!
Also, I the description on his huge, chunky load splashing against Mikoto's belly as his cock slipped out of her cunt gave me chills. Keep doing that, please.
Yours truly,
adorkable-chan
Awesome chapter!!!
Interesting chapter
Hahaha. Awesome chapter. Keep doing what you do.
Another decent chapter, if a bit too short for my liking. I look forward to more from you. As a question to be addressed in your next update, why do you not complete one story before beginning another, rather han creating many stories that must receive attention at once?
This chapter was toppity kek. GG Mei. Well played. I like how you've moved away from 'Sasuke fucking X girl' to more nuanced narratives where each girl has a different dynamic.