Alright, it's taken me a while to get off my ass, but here goes:
So far, from the very first chapter, I've been enthralled by the way Sasuke's Awakening has gone on, from how he as a character has changed, to the way the people around him, Itachi in particular, have come to accept their new role in life. The idea is solid enough, though maybe lacking a little in a non-sexual plot, but even still, the second a new chapter is up, I'm reading through it like my life depends on it.
The thought of Sasuke as a well equipped Incubus has always been interesting, but with a good descriptive writing style, you've managed to make a common enough idea into a superb story. The only slight negative for me would be that it's more focused on the claiming of women rather than a storyline that doesn't involve a willing slut, though that's nowhere near a bad thing. To know a character well enough to make it seem possible is still a rough task, and with Sasuke in particular, you've hit the bullseye with a kunai.
This is well worth the read and anticipation that comes whenever a new chapter is on the horizon. Keep up the good work, please!
Thanks for the review reminder and the chapter. Hentaifoundry is annoying because it does not have a most recently updated section for one's favorited authors like you so it gets annoying to find it in the mess of my account. I completely forgot about Mei and Kiri despite ths trip there so I actually got surprised when she appeared. I definitely look forwards to the night ahead since the quickie felt a bit bland compared to what happened after.
Thanks for the chapter!
Keep up the good work bro.
the chapter was nice. though i would have prefered seeing sasuke kushina naruko mind breaking scene. that would have been aweasome
Another interesting chapter, though I wasn’t expecting anyone to be able to ‘out’ Sasuke so quickly. Still, I must say I’m looking forward to this, but not as much as the next Naruko appearance in Naruto’s Fetish.
i liked it but when you make his cock so big its kinda too weird to picture though narutos fetish original is my fav fic !
Hahaha, that was awesome and enlightening. We get some interesting scenes along with some background to what an incubus does. Nice job on the chapter. Keep up the good work.
Loves it ;)
Sexy. It's all I can say and I love a Naruko lemon where she acts like a whore.