How about you write a story about someone other than sasuke for fuck sakes
Gotta admit, I didn't care for this one. No specific reason, really. Just didn't like it. Though the fact that the coup didn't happen is a little odd. Brings up too many questions that my stupid brain refuses to let go. Still, you can do whatever you want, obviously, I just prefer the other stuff. The sequel to The Lone Wanderer (or whatever the fuck it was called, can't remember) seemed interesting.
I'm glad that you focus on Sasuke. He's incredibly underrepresented, and when he's used in fanfiction its almost exclusively yaoi. I fell into the Sasuke bashing camp when I first started reading fanfiction just because I was still desperately trying to fit in before I realized I prefered him over Naruto. People like you are always welcome, so ignore that cunt that insisted you do something without Sasuke. If he doesn't like that then why the hell is he reading your work in the first place? That's what you do.
Anyways, just wanted to finally leave this review. Have a good day!
hey madethistoreview how about you go and eat a dick huh the writer can do what he wants and I'm free to bitch about it, it's not bothering him so fuck off