madd an acc just do to this. this story is shit i seen this so many times it feels like a copy and paste type fic its going to end the same just like all the others git good and come up with something else thats not the same as ever other fic on thios site just be better 0 out of 10
I have an idea make Naruko Minat's sister i mean that could work just a tought. Oh and don't listen to the other negative person good story btw.
Here's an idea for you. Instead of infesting this site more with terrible stories you stop posting? You write so many stories and yet nothing changes but the premise. Your format is still god awful, you have no sense of what the fucking English language is and you post way too many stories and don't improve on anything.
I don't know if you are a native speaker of English but don't write in english if you aren't. If you are, do something good for this site and stop posting anything. Anything at all that you think is a good idea? Don't post it, because you are not a good writer, in any sense of the word, and you cannot spell or use basic grammar. Go back to grade school and stop infesting this site with terribly written stories that are barely legible. Writing public forum fiction stories is not a way to 'improve' on writing and certainly not on a language as you've demonstrated.
how about hinata cheating on naruto with a half black brother
As always verry good chapter but narto is half uzumaki half namikaze he has his father genetics so he shouldn t be hung if he was the result of incest that wuld be legit but no (and i don t want naruto have a huge dick) sorry for my insistence ;)
It will be awesome if the Raikage the father of all Kushina's children even Naruto XD
Great chapter
I hope you don t make naruto have a big dick in the story Sai said naruto has a little(dick) and i hope you make hinata naive become a slut as she constantly NTR naruto and boruto with the A the fourth raikage kumo need the byakugan other than that great start ;)
Make it female Naruto,when she becomes older you can make her mother and Hinata
Well would be down for a more endowed Naruto and nagato they have uzumaki blood in their veins so it should shine through maybe a uzumaki trio evolving them and kushina dont fall hopefully you dont fall for the continuous naruto ntr looking to see what u come up with keep up thegood work