i swear I have been up the past 2 days reading this fix. It’s great, keep up the good work.
I was wanting to wait till I had gotten caught up to chapter 24 before writing a review... but I couldn't do it. I know there is angst coming, but the comedy that you've illustrated through your story-telling is second to none, and staying very true to the core of the Narutoverse.
Just please finish this story. There are so many great, unfinished NaruHina fanfics out there. And I'd hate for this story to join that growing group. I look forward to reading the rest of your story.
Great chapter! The description of Ino’s nightmare and breakdown was incredible.
on another note, I’m truly sorry about your brother. I pray you will have peace even in grief.
Very goid story writing. Very detailed desprictions that add to the pleasure of reading this story.
Keep up the good work! Hopefully your next chapter will come out soon and you'll keep writing.
Good luck and my respects!
Fantastic story. I especially enjoy that the erotic scenes are mixed into the dark tale. The interwoven emotions and conflict are compelling. Can’t wait to see where this story goes.
Poor Shukaku, he did not deserve that fate. I hope none of the other Bijuu get caught. But Hinata is going to the guy who wants to steal her from Naruto. I hope she can fight off Tonrei on her own or Naruto and Kurama come to the rescue.
Another great chapter! Poor shukkaku ( dunno if I spelled it right lol). I love the jellyfish! Can't wait for more!
OMG!! I love this story as well as your other Naruto story! I absolutely love Hinata and Naruto together! I guess as fellow naruhina fans, we have to support one another lol. Also, I love your story telling and chara terizatio in this and even from your InuYasha fanfics! I love how you keep the characters the same like the anime but yet different to suit this story, especially Hinata ( maybe I'm a little biased because I love her and identify with her), it just seems so much like her :) Great Story!
Awesome fanfic!!! I have started visiting this site more often just to check if another chapter of Monster or Secrets of Hidden Leaf is published or not. Just one thing, can you make the next chapter more action packed?! Maybe Naruto and his genin team run into more of the creatures and Naruto has to fight about 10-12 of them at a time? That would be interesting to read, given how his character development seems to be progressing in this story and also the fact that he is the hero of the fourth ninja war and son of fourth hokage, some more combat sequences would definitely be more interesting to read!!!
Woah.
I have to commend you on creating really dark and depressing atmospheres. If that's what you were aiming for then kudos to you. You've done a great job doing it.
This chapter gave a really uneasy feeling and I quite like that!
If there's (and there probably will be) a character 'transforming' I do hope you make the transformation verbally graphic. Those are the best kinds of mutations! <3
Please keep up the good work on both stories!
Greets!