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by BigE2955

person Random Perv
schedule September 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hmm you really like having Sasuke as the main guy getting all girls don't you? I don't mind, in fact I prefer it over the yaoi stories of NaruSasu. But by now you got like 5, 7 of them write?

I think you should branch out a bit. Like having one of the girls lose a bet and now have to perform sexual favors to another.

Or one shots of the kunoichi having sexual encounters with other villages ninja. 

Or a NarukoxHinata story in which one of them get NTR.

person ThisBarofSoapContainsH2SO4
schedule September 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Gets four to five negative reviews. Insinuates every negative review comes from three distinctive people. Classy guy, this BigE.

Funny, too. You talk about "your typical, Badass!Awesome!Godlike!OOC! Naruto stories" like they're all that different from your own stories. The only difference is the man in question in your stories is Sasuke, that the genre is NTR/cheating/humiliation/SPH (NTR!? In 2017!? How unique and totally original!), the only character capable of pleasuring women is (75% of the time) Sasuke and his foot long dick (because who doesn't love cock and shitty hentai clichés) and that the women of Konoha (or the Elemental Nations in general) only want Sasuke's cock.

A change in character and genre doesn't suddenly make this garbage any better than something like A Lewd New World or anything written by VFSnake. Especially when stylistically, there's almost no difference in the way you write, from the generic and boring adjectives right down to the surety that all will bow before your typical, badass, awesome, godlike, OOC Sasuke.

I mean, at the mo' all we have is confirmation that Sasuke has had sex. Once. And that otherwise, he's just a deadbeat with self-imposed homelessness and an innate desire to try and fuck his daughter up as much as Itachi did him, way back in the day.

person Anonymous
schedule September 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is pretty much the exact same fic as naruto's fetish that's pretty lazy and meta get off the authors dick 

person Anon
schedule September 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You sound awfully salty about SS being canon.

person neko
schedule September 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ugh its way to much for me... 90% of ff are about sasuke.

its enought, just enough...

every1 copy/pasting the badass sasuke template ;x