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for Secrets of the Hidden Leaf

by Sessakag

person NIV
schedule October 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm a huge fan of NaruHina!! Love them together! It will be interesting to see how you bring Sasuke into it. Plus, I love your InuYasha works as well :)

person Ruku
schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another fantastic chapter! I wonder what Hinata's desires and fantasies are? We pretty much know what Naruto is into but Hinata's are a mystery. Keep up the good work!

schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I gave it a second chance and honestly it's good really good so I'm sorry if my first review came off sounding kinda douchey I just don't like Sasuke at all so I pretty much skimmed through the first time so once again sorry. That being said I do like what you did with Naruto and Hinata's personalities and I'm looking forward to ch3

person red demon
schedule October 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm loving this fic. One of the main things I love is Naruto's confidence and experience. A lot of Naruto/Hinata fans don't understand that Naruto would have to be the driving force behind that relationship. Hinata is just to shy.

I really love that Naruto wants to push her boundaries and experiment. I do hope that Naruto can talk her in to using clamps and trying anal. Though she'll have to be prepped for the latter :) I'll keep reading this fic with interest.

person redlox
schedule October 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

i like this story as long as Naruto gets to get all of Hinata firsts. includiong boobjob and anal.

person Sarcsan
schedule October 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This made me horny

Pleaaaaase update this! This is so good

schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You lost me as a fan with this one good luck with your future works

person Anonymous
schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely love this! It was freaking hot as hell and I like how Naruto is a lot more mature and sure of himself. Pretty awesome how it take place after the war, I feel like people don't really write fanfic for that time period much. not sure why though. Anyway this was really well written and the description awas soooo good and detailed. I hope you dedicate some time to this cause I really want to read more and I'm a fan of the Naruto/Hinta/Sasuke pair. Don't worry about the haters. For some reason a lot of the fans of Naruto are so sensitve and like to bitch moan and whine when they don't get stuff the want or when people write stuff that doesn't follow what they think it should. Really stupid since the point of fanfiction is to use characters from a series to tell a DIFFERENT story. Fucking gets on my nerves when I look for reviews to see if I wantt to read the fic and its just a bunch of crybabies. 

Sorry, got off topic a little bit. I loved the chapter and can't wait to read more when you get the time! 

person Ruku
schedule September 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is amazingly well written, perhaps the best written fanfic I've ever read, I'm certainly a new fan of yours. :)

One thing I will say though, I really hope there's no Sasunaru in it, that would completely turn me off the story, which would be a shame because you're an exceptional writer.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :-D